A cloudy lesson

Luke walked up the ladder with his grandad Thom. He was going to make some clouds today. On the platform ubove the sky Thom showed Luke how to make a cloud ' wow ' Luke thought 'grandad is really good at making clouds'. When Luke had a go he only made a little cloud. So Thom showed Luke  what to do with his breath.

 Of course Luke copied his grandad but nothing happened so he tried again this time harder making the cloud maker fall down but Luke went with it. Thom ran over to Luke who had just noticed the dent in the cloud maker/key. Luke tried to put it back in a circle but failed this time he made it into a long circle instead. He suddenly had an idea. Suddenly he changed it into a star grandad blew on it and every cloud they make from now on  they have it in a shape.

Clocktower writing

I never wanted this.  I never wanted to be so lonely.  It all started when fell in love with a prince - I mean you would too. He was so handsome and his parents were very nice. When we got together he would always bring me balloons, even when we fought. He was very protective over me if another boy came and talked to me the prince would be there, he would also be there if my brother started abusing me in public. Basicly he was the best boyfriend ever. One day I went to the beach.  My sister wasn't with us because she was with her boyfriend By accident I saw her kissing her boyfriend -when I saw his face I nearly had a heart attack. .....It was the PRINCE!!  I felt horrible. At home my parents tried to cheer me up - had they known this all along?  My sister came in looking smug.  I wanted to punch her in the face.  When she me she asked what was wrong.  I wanted to say 'Hi fat butt' but before I could say anything my parents said, "She is just upset that you have a boyfriend and she doesn't."
I didn't know what they were talking about.  Just then, the prince came in.  I had to resist the urge to punch him in the face as well as my sister.  Then the prince saw that me and my sister were in the same house.  He just said "Never mind." really fast and shut the door on his way out.

Going to bed was a nightmare that night.  Finally I gave up trying to sleep.  Then I heard a tap, tap, tap.  The prince was standing outside my window!
"C'mon." he said with a smile on his face.
"OK I said, my heart racing. We climbed outside and he took me to a clocktower- inside was the most beautiful dress ever.  It was soft and silky.  The colour was my favourite- a pinkish white whch covered the dress.  At the bottom was a cog.  He asked me to put it on and told me to go to sleep. When I woke the dress was tight on my body and felt rough.  The prince was no-where to be seen.
I suddenly realised what I had to do.  I connected the cog at the bottom of my dress with the other cogs fastened around the room.  I twirled on my tiptoes and the world suddenly started to wake up again.  All because I was controlling the world now.  If I stopped spining and went outside now the world would stop again.

Maths goal: I want to know groupings to 1000

I have not achieved this goal because I forgot about it.

                                                                        Next step: PRACTICE IT 

Writing goal: editing

I normally edit my work while I'm going so when I when I write I edit and I like to write.

                                                                                     Next step: Write more

Key competency goal: finish my work on time

I have not achived this goal yet

                                                        Next step: Try harder

Maths goal: I want to know addition to 20

I have sort of achieved this goal because my mum has made me practice. I am also getting about 63% every time.  

                                                            Next step: addition to 30

Reading goal: I can tune in to interesting words and use them in my speaking and writing

I am not reading the right books to achieve this goal.

                                                                                   
Next step: Start reading books that are approriate for my age.

Key competency: keep my desk tidy on a regular basis

I have had my desk tidy for the whole of term two so far so I think I have achieved this goal.

                                                                                   Next step: Keep my belongings tidy

Autumn Leaves